Poem by Natalia Smothers
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I have a warm and peaceful feeling.
I know you’re in this world with me.
It doesn’t matter if you’re far or near.
I take a happy sail to sea.
I didn’t notice how this happened.
I wasn’t sure for a while.
I worried if we’d stay together
Or fly like lonely birds apart.
The stormy waves subsided quickly.
Your steady course has kept me through.
You gave me an amazing feeling.
I’'m always in this world with you.
2 comments:
Natalia, what a sweet poem!
Thank you very much for your encouragement! I posted this poem on poetry.com website at:
http://www.poetry.com/Publications/display.asp?ID=P8853726&BN=999&PN=1
It has a "Rate This Poem" button for collecting readers' feedback. The website has given me the Editor's Choice Award in March 2008 "for outstanding achievement in poetry presented by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry." I guess I can present my work as an award-winning poem now. :) - Natalia
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